Story, Structure, Dialogue.

 

structure thumbnails

 

Simplified scene plan
Simplified scene plan
Initial structure plan
Initial structure plan

The original srtucture of the narrative was too crowded to fit on the paper.There were so many branches that I started thinking about how exactly I am going to implement it if there is so much going on.  I decided to not include the ‘going out to get lunch’ scenes as they were less relevant to the story progression. Instead the interaction that was meant to happen in the shops would be done over e-mail.

Less crowded and simplified structure plan
Less crowded and simplified structure plan

 

Button and dialogue plan
Button and dialogue plan
cont/ endings plan
cont/ endings plan
cont. Endings Plan
cont. Endings Plan
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